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Ronin's Tale Part 4. 
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"Hay, Ronin! I got good news!" yelled Sevril Relik as he ran in Sepacuna's tent. "Come one, you got to...Am I interrupting something?" asked the puzzled Assassin.

"No, no. Not at all." Said the young general, gasping for breath.

"Well, I'll just leave you two alone...

"GET HER OFF ME NOW!" commanded Ronin. He had let the sorceress cry herself to sleep in his arms. A noble deed that made him all warm and fuzzy, but not the best decision he ever made. Her grip was surprisingly strong. So strong, in fact, that the boy lost all the feeling in both of his arms. He was also kept in a kneeling position for the last six hours (giving both his legs one heck of a cramp.) I can't feel my arms. Pleas just get her off me. PLEEEAAASSSS!??!?!?!?!?"

"Ok. I do know one method that could get her off of you, BUT you owe me three times the number of Gobo's she killed, got that?"

2 minutes later.

Rellik was sent flying across the encampment, leaving death and destruction in his wake. This was followed by Sepacuna, and Ronin who cashualy walked out. While Sepacuna seemed to enjoy watching this Hurricane of destruction, Ronin simply winced as the assassin crashed through one more tent, and a couple of crates.

"Feel better." he asked.

Sepacuna leaned over, and gave him a kiss. "Much."

"He said he had some good news. Think he's alive enough to tell us?"

"I didn't throw him that hard, did I?"

Ronin took out a retractable telescope, to see if he could find what was left of Relik. he found the assassin, in one piece. Unfortunately he got his head stuck in tree (with a half dozen shades trying to pull him out!) "No comment."


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Mon Dec 03, 2007 9:21 pm
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I am enjoying this story, and you have a refreshing angle but couldn't you make it a bit more, Druchii. Not that you have to make it more evil just a little more refined. The idea of an assasin runing into a sorceresses tent yelling does not seem to suit them at all.

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Mon Dec 03, 2007 10:35 pm
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Sorry. I knew that comment has to do with the sect enmity. Yeah. Ronin was in the Tent as well (after just about everyone in the army, including the assassin, tells him to apologize. I'll clean it up as I go on. I'll clear it up in the next installment.

Again any comments (the more brutal, the better) have been really appreciative.


Tue Dec 04, 2007 4:54 am
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