need help on this local tournament list

[Cyperz]

SS- talisman of pres, ironcurse icon, Dispel scroll and lvl 4
295

death hag- cry of war, COB
290
master- opal amulet, charmed shield, halberd, HA, SDC, BSB, Mount Cold one
139

20 witch elf- full comm
250
5 dark riders- SH, RXB, musc
110
5 dark riders- SH, RXB, musc
110
10 dark shards- musc
130
10 dark shards- musc, std, banner of eternal flame
150

9 Cold one knights- full comm, razor standard
355 - BSB master goes in here
Cold one chariot
115
19 Black guard- full comm, gleaming pennant banner
320 - COB goes in here and make them 7 wide incl cob

14 sisters of slaughter- full comm, war banner
275 - bloodwrack goes in here and SS in 2 rank making them 5 wide
bloodwrack shrine
175
5 warlock
125
kharibdyss
160

2999

i am not sure what lore too go with as standard for this list??
do i lack of somthing in this list,??

please comment the list for good and bad

[Coop]

Is your SS going into the black guard?

She's not very mobile, so death probably isn't the way to go. Shadow might be a good idea because then you can buff up a lot of these combat blocks (by hexing whatever they're fighting).

[Cyperz]

She Goes with sisters.
But all in all is the list Good. Or Will you Exchange something ?

[Ajattaro]

Since you have lots of infantry, you should have lots of fire power to force enemy to come to you, so you dont have to cross the board yourself. Thats why you need RBTs in the list, especially when you have flaming shooting. You could squeeze 2 RBT in with throwing chariot out and something else. You already got strong combat units and lots of them.

Your BSB has quite odd set of equipment. One could argue that charmed shield wont work with halberd when you are not using it. Deflecting shooting hits is not concern. I would invest into his safety more, because opponent sure like to get him and that gear wont help longer than one combat round max.

Too bad you have exact 750pts in core. Those non flaming DS could have been trimmed for points.

[Cyperz]

the reason why i dont have much shooting is that my shooting dice always are jinxs too never hit or wound, i always roll way under the statistic.
but in that sayd you have totally right in the fear factor they provide,
on the bsb, i give him the shield becuase of i got 5 point too spent

so here is and update too Little more shooting, please comment

6 POINT TOO SPENT WHERE?
SS- talisman of pres 4++, ironcurse icon, Dispel scroll and lvl 4
295

death hag- cry of war, COB
290
master- talisman of endurance 5++ ,the other trickster´s shard, halberd, HA, SDC, BSB, Mount Cold one
164

10 witch elf- musc,
120
5 dark riders- SH, RXB, musc
110
5 dark riders- SH, RXB, musc
110
10 dark shards- musc
130
10 dark shards- musc
130
10 dark shards- musc, std, banner of eternal flame
150

9 Cold one knights- full comm, razor standard
355 - BSB master goes in here
RBT
70
20 Black guard- full comm, gleaming pennant banner
335 - COB goes in here and make them 7 wide incl cob

14 sisters of slaughter- full comm, war banner
275 - bloodwrack goes in here and SS in 2 rank making them 5 wide
bloodwrack shrine
175
5 warlock
125
kharibdyss
160

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